Editing

Gemma and I are now focusing on how we can change the blurriness of our film, as some of the clips are too distorted that it does not look correct. As well as doing this we are re-considering putting some of the original dialogue back into the film, as it will explain the story fully, the audience will be able to see the stereotypes that we chose as well as it will look less like a music video if we were to include some speech. To accomplish this, we have changed the music from being loud to soft and more in the background, so that we can add diegetic sounds - connoting realism and making it more nauralistic. From this i have learnt that by adding diegetic sounds it created a tense atmosphere without meaning to, which leaves the audience with a sense of axiousness.