This is a rough outline of what the dialogue in our opening will be like, we decided that some of our dialogue that we will be saying in the opening will be improvised as it will then make it more realistic and show real emotion.
News Report will be played in the background
Melissa Wilson went missing in the early hours of December 19th 2001, 6 months after her disappearance she has been identified and found buried with fatal wounds to the neck her family are in a state of shock and would not comment.
Another girl Joanna mason was also identified and found buried with devastatingly large and deep wounds to the torso only a few meters away from Melissa, both girls went missing on the same day and the killer still remains unknown.
This is for the scene of the two girls as they walk out of the pub.
Melissa: That was such a laugh Sam was so drunk did you see him completely fall on his face (laugh)
Joanna: oh my god yeah he’s such a light weight.
Melissa: you know what, I don’t know what to do about Sara her parents have made her go cold turkey there’s just no helping her. (Drunken slur)
Joanna: yeah (not really paying attention)
Melissa: Be careful (catching Melissa as she walks into the road)
Joanna: (angrily) she’s such an idiot why did she have to do it to herself I trusted her and she does this.
Melissa: (upset) I know babe look its hard to be in control on that stuff but we can’t do anything.
Joanna: yeah what do I care anymore it’s her life we just have to have a good time without her. (Laugh)
Melissa: (nerves) Yeah.
(In the Forest girls walk by the pond and sit down)
Melissa: ahh I nearly slipped (laugh)
Noise in the background
Joanna: what was that (scared)
Melissa: nothing (nerves laugh)
Joanna: no it isn’t funny I heard something.
Melissa: yeah probably a bird.
Joanna: okay what ever I really need a toilet.
Melissa: then go over there.
Joanna: what!! I can’t go over there.
Melissa: go on no one is watching.
Joanna: fine!
(Joanna walks of into the forest.)
(Melissa panics a bit as she hears weird noises but can’t see anything.)
(You see Sara’s head appear right beside her head.)
Sara: (whisper) now you will know what it is like.
(Melissa screams)
(Sara slashes her throat and pulls her away)
Joanna: what’s going on don’t mess about.
(Joanna walks out of the forest and a shocked expression appears on her face.)
(Blackout)
SCREAM!!!!!!!!
The End
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